4 Responses to “hair styles”

  1. I liked the image of the golden swaying hair.

    Could you have added more hair colours e.g. red?

    Next time you could look at your punctuation.

  2. 1) I like this poem.

  3. 1. I like that you described something different it is very unique!
    2. maybe add more next time!
    3. what do you really mean about the thin chocolate coloured hair?

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