2 Responses to “Sun rays”

  1. Jack c and Alexis October 1, 2020 at 10:33 am

    1. We like the part “behind the umbrella trees”.
    2.You should delete a through and what tiny gaps.
    3. You could make it longer.

  2. Can you improve that🤔.

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