Sun rays
You are the shining sun rays,
escaping through through the tiny gaps,
behind the umbrella trees
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1. We like the part “behind the umbrella trees”.
2.You should delete a through and what tiny gaps.
3. You could make it longer.
Can you improve that🤔.