The stories of the world by Heidi and Ethan
You are a tasty apple
hanging on the tree branch
waiting to be picked.
You are a speedy cheetah
as quick as a flash
running through the weaving grass.
You are Burston Primary School
a hub of learning
a fun place to be.
You are a cliff
with rocks falling off
crashing down in a tornado.
You are a sneaky, silent ninja
creeping in the dark
putting the bad guys in jail.
You are the feeling of happiness
a smile spreading over my face
a warmth growing inside.
You are a Friday
the smell of fish and chips
and a long weekend ahead.
You are a my muscles
strong and sturdy
helping me lift things.
You are a tornado
spinning around like fire
sucking up the earth.
You are the memories in my heart
Reminding me what to do
and what not to do.
1.great poem and the long time and effort you used to create this amazing poem.
2.how does fire spin around?
3.you could add some more detail.
1.Very good!
2. Why was it so long?
3. Try to make the poem smaller next time good decriptoin.