You are
You are the 8th invisibel ring of Saturn.
you are the poem’s threads, tied neatly together like a shoelace.
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What a great first line! I think with an imagination like that you could extend your ideas further next time.
This was really nice,just remember to add capital letters and invisible not invisebel 🙂