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6 Responses to “Isabella and Rahaf dps”

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    Deih and Kumba SFD October 1, 2020 at 10:22 am

    What kind of witch things

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    Maddison October 1, 2020 at 10:25 am

    Lovely poem so funny

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    Ben and Bene October 1, 2020 at 10:32 am

    1. I like that you wrote ‘talking about witchy things.’

    2. Could you use a better word than old?

    3. Try not to forget a full stop at the end of your sentence.

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    Y5SFD October 8, 2020 at 10:38 am

    I like the way you said suspicious, selfish grandma.
    But next time use a better word for old. You can use aged or elderly.

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    Anonymous October 8, 2020 at 10:40 am

    I like how you used alliteration.
    Why did you choose a grandma to be a witch?
    You could name the witch.

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    Mariam October 8, 2020 at 10:41 am

    It’s is very scary. Turn that’s the best part about it

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