My poem of abstract nouns.
My poem of abstract nouns
You are the happiness that fills our world.
You are the sadness at the bottom of the deep, blue sea.
You are the hope waiting at the side of the street.
You are the anger in the red, hot core of the Earth.
You are the politeness up in the white, fluffy clouds near heaven.
You are the guilt that’s chopping down our wonderful trees.
You are the passion of a tap dancer; loud but quiet.
You are the jealousness in the devil’s eyes.
You are the thankfulness of an apple when it is picked from a tree.
You are the hatred of a glass being smashed.
You are the trust that lies deep within a giant’s heart.
You are the love that makes you feel like you belong.
You are the loneliness of a lost glove lying on top of a bench.
You are the rudeness that flows towards an innocent person.
You are the kindness of a smile you shown to a stranger.
You are the inquisitiveness of a newborn puppy.
You are the creativity of writing a poem.
You are the end.
I love you adjectives, have you had a problem with you format.
I love the sentence where you put you are the jealousness in the devils eyes.
I like the word flows keep up the good work well done 😊
I loved the bit when it said you are hope waiting at the side of the road.💙
By Amelia Norbrige