My You are Poem

You are a mystical moon that shines every night like a lunar lantern.

You are a boring bottle that stays perfectly still everyday.

You are a lazy lad that moves as slow as a tortoise.

You are a giant goat that eats all the buildings like a filthy ogre

You are a magical mop that cleans every day like a slave.

You are a smelly sock that needs to be thrown in the bin.

You are a shooting star  that brightens up my day.

One Response to “My You are Poem”

  1. Mikolaj and Summer. October 1, 2020 at 10:26 am

    1.I like how you used mystical moon.
    2.You could change the word giant on the fourth sentence.

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