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7 Responses to “Nazisb and hanibaldps”

  1. Next time don’t use the word ‘farting’ but lovely poem.

  2. 1. I love the description of the fish.
    2. Could you make this a bit longer?
    3. Maybe use a better adverb for farting.

  3. I LOVE ITS SO AWESOME

  4. 1. I love your poem about the fluffy tail with the bow on it!
    2.What talents does the fish have?
    3.I think you could make it a little bit longer and describe the bow and the ocean a little bit more.

  5. 1) I really like the alliteration E.G: Farting fish.
    2)Can you give another adjective for colourful?
    3)Maybe you can add a few more sentences.

  6. Because it’s a funny poem

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