5 Responses to “The beautiful bird”

  1. I like the Crystal sky.
    Can you maybe name something like the plane or the crystal?
    What is the plane doing it could be flying or landing?

  2. That was good but add more into your poem

  3. Its Good Just Add Some More Suspense into it .

  4. like it
    How did you get all the good describing words?
    I think you need to add more in to it
    by maddie

  5. I really like this.
    Can you add some more information?
    by Sophia

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