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12 Responses to “The future”

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    Ellie sww September 30, 2020 at 9:37 am

    .I like the part where you said or the survival of society its self .

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    Tulisa SWW September 30, 2020 at 9:44 am

    I like the way you said
    in a ugly world of lies

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    Axel sww September 30, 2020 at 9:44 am

    Charlotte and Ryan I like how You used the phrase “in an ugly world of lies.”

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    Ryan September 30, 2020 at 9:47 am

    Obviously she’s talking about me and yes I am the hope that gives us life.

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      isabella SWW March 24, 2021 at 9:15 am

      hahahaha yes Ryan you are brother. and charlotte i loved the bit when you said You are the burning and bright future,

      the hope that gives us life.’ bye

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    Amber And Bella October 1, 2020 at 10:23 am

    I like the describing world blatant! Could you find a better word for ugly?
    Bella and Amber-Antony.

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    Hamza TJS October 1, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I really like how you used in an ugly world of lies and your use of words is used very well, your really enjoyed your poem!

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    Charlotte TJS October 1, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I really like how your poem has a lot of excellent vocabulary And I like how you said in an ugly world of lies. This poem is amazing!

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    Bethany October 1, 2020 at 10:30 am

    I love the choice of words and the phrase ugly world of lies.Your poem is amazing!

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    PoppyTJS October 8, 2020 at 10:27 am

    I like the part when you said In an ugly world of lies. Your poem is amazing.

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    Jake October 8, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I like “the bright burning future” but it would be a good improvement to get a better word for “ugly”

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    FrancesTJS October 15, 2020 at 8:39 am

    Your poem is incredible and I’d love to hear more poems. I love the bit where it says the hope that gives us life.

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