You are the water in the River Wye ,like the sparkles in the stars
you are the warden’s venomous nail polish waiting to paralyse
you are the first in my life like the only Earth in the universe
you are the devil in the world like the bully at school
you are the mumbling thunder at war with the powerful sun
you are the warm snow that creates burning hot ice on the cool winter path .
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1, You have a good imagination
2, Why did you chose to do the River Wye in paragraph 1?
3, You could put something different than *sparkles*.