What are you? by Betty

You are the water in the River Wye ,like the sparkles in the stars 

you are the warden’s venomous nail polish waiting to paralyse 

you are the first in my life like the only Earth in the universe 

you are the devil in the world like the bully at school 

you are the mumbling thunder at war with the powerful sun 

you are the warm snow that creates burning hot ice on the cool winter path .

One Response to “What are you? by Betty”

  1. 1, You have a good imagination
    2, Why did you chose to do the River Wye in paragraph 1?
    3, You could put something different than *sparkles*.

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