You are,
You are a tree,
swaying in the wild,wonderful wind ,
like a balloon.
You are a playground,
with millions of kids playing on you,
like a magnet.
You are a wonderful, colourful maple leaf,
slowly floating down,
down to the ever flowing, never ending river .
You are the taste of Monday morning ,
the feeling of school ,
when I wake up .
You are the smell of the wild woods ,
on a beautiful summers evening ,
fresh air everywhere .
You are the sound of birds tweeting ,
at 5am in the morning ,
and crickets chirping loudly.
Josie.
you can make it better a bit more better.
how long did it take
you can change the words
1. I like the part about birds
2.Can you describe more?
3.I think you can improve your punctuation.
Wow! You are obviously very experienced with poetry, and i can assume that this took a long time to make for all of the detail!
this is an amazing poem, how did you get the ideas, they are a bit random you could maybe link all of the pieces of writing
It is a good poem you r a good poet.
i like the part when you said when i wake up it seems like you will never wake up.
maybe make the paragraphs longer
Josie.
you can make it better a bit more better.
how long did it take
you can change the words