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2 Responses to “You are!”

  1. I love you are a cookie melting the chocolate sitting on your crispy head! I thought it was very creative.
    What else could you do to exstend it?
    Maybe you could add a bit more description.In you are a little rat exploring your habitat.

  2. I like your descriptive language
    Extend it and add more similes
    Maybe add a metaphor
    Bye bye

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