You are a cookie melting the chocolate sitting on your crispy head!
You are a blanket shivering and drenched in water waiting for warmth to dry you!
You are a highlighter lighting up someone’s work!
You are a frozen delight chilling in the winter day light!
You are a little rat exploring your habitat!
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I love you are a cookie melting the chocolate sitting on your crispy head! I thought it was very creative.
What else could you do to exstend it?
Maybe you could add a bit more description.In you are a little rat exploring your habitat.
I like your descriptive language
Extend it and add more similes
Maybe add a metaphor
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