You are a cookie melting the chocolate sitting on your crispy head!
You are a blanket shivering and drenched in water waiting for warmth to dry you!
You are a highlighter lighting up someone’s work!
You are a frozen delight chilling in the winter day light!
You are a little rat exploring your habitat!
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1) nice adjectives e.g shivering.
2)What is the delight?
3)Use more of of name it.
1.Is really good and that it has some good adjectives in it 2.how did u think of this amazing discretion? 3. next time add adverbs.
Ellie-SGJ
I like some of the adjectives you have used they you have very creative ideas
Did you have any help with your poem because it is really good
You could maybe try to add some adverbs to it or when u said little rat exploring your habitat you could maybe have a better adjective then little.