3 Responses to “you are a…poem”

  1. Hi.
    I like you poem it’s gud
    how are you
    Try and add more

  2. Felicity and Stanley October 1, 2020 at 10:31 am

    1. I really like your descriptive words for the snowman.
    2.What were you thinking when you wrote this? need to use capital letters and full stops but apart from that everything was amazing.

  3. Cameron, Abigail, Mason October 1, 2020 at 10:33 am

    1) We especially like your similes.

    2) Could you improve the fireplace?

    3) You could improve it by describing things further.

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