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You are poem…… By Maya

You are a bright ball of light brightening up the dim night sky.

You are the smell of a juicy orange squirting out sour loveliness.

You are a sweet scone bursting with fresh curdling cream and strawberry jam.

You are the sound of brass bells ringing through the night.

You are the shadow of a zombie dripping with raspberry red blood.

You are a courageous cat scrapping the wall with your claws.

You are a careful clock ticking away in time with your pulse.

You are a determined dictionary blossoming with wonderful words and fantastical phrases.

You are a delicate stain glass window full of beautiful colours.

You are the taste of a sour sweet sizzling in a mouth full of marvels.

You are a teacher telling a class about a new tricky topic.

You are a curious girl discovering new and wonderful things about your past.

You are a scientist working away in a lab discovering new concoctions.

You are a jewel getting found  by a ponged pirate.

You are a cloud full of water ready to be popped.

You are the end of time!

4 Responses to “You are poem…… By Maya”

  1. Hi there, Maya, I really enjoyed reading your poem, maybe a bit on the long side. My favourite line was – You are a determined dictionary blossoming with wonderful words and fantastical phrases.
    From Maggie SWW

  2. Hello Maya! I really enjoyed reading your poem. I adored the scone idea and I could just see that cream and jam!
    I thought the stained glass window was a lovely idea. I wondered what a ponged pirate was – my class had some fantastic ideas!
    I am looking forward to reading more of your work

  3. Hi Miya I like the You are a curious girl discovering new and wonderful things about your past. Have you like writing poetry? I’m not sure that I like the cat. Olivia SWW

  4. Freya SWW
    Hi maya really like the work and why don’t you describe the stain glass window a bit more?and what about you improve on the sour lemon bit well done.
    Freya SWW

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