You are an angry apple that has been taken over by a wiggly worm,
You are a wooden plank being fixed by a hammer,
You are the golden leaves shimmering in the chill,
You are a perfectly prickly pineapple living your best life in the warm sunshine.
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It is good but I think you need to improve the 2nd paragraph.