What are you? By Cody

You are an ash vampire, constantly prowling at dusk for prey.

You are 13 always left out and unlucky.

You are a short knife stabbing the mind of a pupil to enhance their vocabulary .

You are Donkey questioning everything.

You are an onion full of layers like Shrek.

You are London always popular.

You are an unpopulated Western always abandoned.

You are a black hole sucking everything into the end.

3 Responses to “What are you? By Cody”

  1. I like this poem it’s cool
    Why a knife?
    Maybe more description

  2. We really like your poem its really imaginitive. Why does a donkey question everything? maybe instead of a donkey you could have a budding young child or perhaps a lamb.

  3. I like the fact that you used shrek.

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