You are an ash vampire, constantly prowling at dusk for prey.
You are 13 always left out and unlucky.
You are a short knife stabbing the mind of a pupil to enhance their vocabulary .
You are Donkey questioning everything.
You are an onion full of layers like Shrek.
You are London always popular.
You are an unpopulated Western always abandoned.
You are a black hole sucking everything into the end.
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I like this poem it’s cool
Why a knife?
Maybe more description
We really like your poem its really imaginitive. Why does a donkey question everything? maybe instead of a donkey you could have a budding young child or perhaps a lamb.
I like the fact that you used shrek.