4 Responses to “Book”

  1. I love the creativity in your poem!

  2. Lucy D and Sayf October 1, 2020 at 10:30 am

    Some FANTASTIC description and you have placed some rhyming in there which is pretty impressive.

    Which is your favourite book???

    Maybe next time make it longer and add some more word types.

  3. What kind of world does it lead to in the book?
    You could improve,put different sentence starters.

  4. Hi,
    I like how it was consistent and how you used some very descriptive words and phrases.
    What is your favourite book ?
    I think you could add a bit more on to the ends of some of your lines.

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