3 Responses to “Cats in the nigh”

  1. Thomas and Katie October 1, 2020 at 10:27 am

    I liked how it rhymed and how it was consistent. Where is your commas? I would try and describe the setting more.
    Over all well done!

  2. We like how you discribed what the cats do.
    Do you like cats?
    Your next step is to start the last four lines with something other than they and add commas after each line and full stop after a verse.
    I love your poem.


  3. Kieran and Sofia October 1, 2020 at 10:34 am

    The poem is incredible it really does describe the way ally cats act. Great poem!
    Were is the punctuation?
    Next time put punctuation in the poem.

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