4 Responses to “Oceans”

  1. Alexis and Jack c October 1, 2020 at 10:25 am

    1. Perfect but to short.
    2. Maybe add more about the sea.
    3. You could decribe the sea as a huge gem what’s bumpy or something.

  2. I like the word voyage in the sentence

  3. The poem is great with its words.
    But the poem could have more punctuation.
    And just a bit more sentences.

  4. I really liked the sentence with voyage it was very creative.
    maybe add some more punctuation.
    but you could make a bigger poem .

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