Oceans
An ocean voyage
As waves break over the bow
The sea welcomes me.
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1. Perfect but to short.
2. Maybe add more about the sea.
3. You could decribe the sea as a huge gem what’s bumpy or something.
I like the word voyage in the sentence
The poem is great with its words.
But the poem could have more punctuation.
And just a bit more sentences.
I really liked the sentence with voyage it was very creative.
maybe add some more punctuation.
but you could make a bigger poem .