teach live poem

You are a beautiful happy dashing pug rushing across the road.

You are a house crushing giant stomping through the dark, scary woods.

You are a red grape hanging calmly from the vine, waiting to be eaten.

You are a magnificent penguin waddling across the ice.

You are an exhausted turtle crawling slowly to his bed. 

One Response to “teach live poem”

  1. Emilia and Hannah October 1, 2020 at 10:39 am

    1. I think that your simil/es were amazing for us to read because it made me feel calm and relaxed.
    2. Have you got turtles
    3. Do you think that you can improve your poem by saying tortoise rather than turtle because turtles live in water?

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