The animal poem

You are a slithering, snake laid on the sizzling Sahara.

You are a pretty, pink pig pooping in its purple pen.

You are a flying sheep flipping in the freezing cold air.

You are a daring dog dancing on a donkey.

You are a dumb donkey dancing on a digestive biscuit. 

You are a chicken clucking at a carpenter’s cap.

2 Responses to “The animal poem”

  1. Good alliteration, maybe add in some more verses

  2. Why a pretty pink pig pooping? could you think of anything else to replace that ? Over all though i think its really good:)

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