6 Responses to “The Animals”

  1. I like the word dangerous

  2. 1. I liked when you put you are a wasp scarily stinging people
    2.Why did you put funny fox flying in the air ?

  3. Charlotte and Amy October 8, 2020 at 10:25 am

    Love this one
    1. How could you extend it
    2. Add extra infomation

  4. I like the word use of dangerous and it is very good

  5. What was the dangerous dog doing?

  6. Lexie and Julia October 8, 2020 at 10:31 am

    1. I liked how you used the word wicked
    2. Why did you say the fox was flying

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