You are the sound of a silent scream echoing between a silent scream through a cave or through a tunnel up the cave and down the cave a powerful breath through the tunnel and through the abandoned tunnel and a nervous scream the patterns on the wall lighted up when the scream a lonely man was sitting through the tunnel he was dead cheerful like a happy monkey.  

One Response to “THE TUNNEL ?!!!”

  1. Thank you for submitting your poem Chloe and Jayden. Take a deep breath and read it aloud to yourselves. Where should new lines start? Where should there be full stops?

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