3 Responses to “You Are”

  1. 1. Some great juxtaposition for Sunday morning
    2. What is the second line about?
    3.A couple more lines?

  2. Could you try and add alliteration?
    I like how you added lots of adjectives.
    Could you make it a bit longer.

  3. Excellent descriptive sentences
    Who is smiling on the first line?
    Maybe a couple more lines and some rhyming

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