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You Are

You are as cold as an ice cube waiting for the heat.

You are a beautiful swan paddling across the river slowly.

You are as frosted as a Frostie cereal box.

You are a clean lolly-pop waiting to be licked.

You are a Siamese cat lying down straight asleep like a tired exclamation mark.

You are a wet note squished into a tight bag.

You are the impossibility of burning concrete, a happy cry, a dry sneeze and water clouds.

2 Responses to “You Are”

  1. Evan and Elijah October 1, 2020 at 10:36 am

    1.I liked the siamese cat being described as a tired exclamation mark.
    2. Do you have a siamese cat?
    3. Could you use a different adjective with lolly-pop? Tasty, silky?

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