2 Responses to “clean spring”

  1. I love the line sweet honey soaks bread.
    What made you pick spring.
    Next time try not to include flowers that much

  2. I like that all of these are very joined to spring.What do the flowers smell of? Next time use capitals for the start of each line.

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