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3 Responses to “food”

  1. We like what you put.
    Remember capital letters and full stops and maybe enhance your work.
    But amazing work well done.

  2. This poem is good
    It needs to be longer
    did you not finish?

  3. Lauren and Amelia November 12, 2020 at 10:24 am

    Try not to be to repetitive with the word pudding but other than that it’s really good .
    And I like your idea about food because everyone likes food.

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