Try not to be to repetitive with the word pudding but other than that it’s really good .
And I like your idea about food because everyone likes food.
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We like what you put.
Remember capital letters and full stops and maybe enhance your work.
But amazing work well done.
This poem is good
It needs to be longer
did you not finish?
Try not to be to repetitive with the word pudding but other than that it’s really good .
And I like your idea about food because everyone likes food.