One Response to “My poem by Sophie”

  1. I think you did a superb job of creating a multi-sensory image of Christmas, Sophie! It instantly took me back to those dark winter nights, waiting for Father Christmas to arrive and thoroughly enjoying the merry atmosphere of that time. You’ve got me excited for Christmas now!
    How could you incorporate the sense of smell, touch or taste within it too?
    Next time you write a Haiku, see if you can use the 5, 7, 5 syllables feature!

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