winter time

Breeze howls across the air,

frost crunches along the ice,

Robins tweet in the arctic snow.


frosty streets shimmer with ice,

Crystal patterns on the window,

Ice jingles with bitter wind.


Slippery ice on my feet,

Children play in the snow,

Snow sinks as you trudge.


Hedgehogs hibernate ,

Rabbits bounce,

Snow falls from the air.


One Response to “winter time”

  1. I loved it it was a really nice poem and I think it may of benn one of the best out of all!!!
    Why do it about winter?
    I don’t think there should be any inprovements in this piece of work

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