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Haikus by Zac

Leaves crunching 

crispy leaves fall

With a cold breeze.

 

 bird’s singing

snow falling and building snowmen

stood staring.

 

Neighbours shovelling snow

children playing 

Snowmen building.

 

Bulldozers moving snow 

children wining 

snow balls being thrown.

 

Hot meals cooking 

Birds singing 

cold air rushing.

One Response to “Haikus by Zac”

  1. Casey and Caiden October 21, 2020 at 1:54 pm

    Hi Zac,
    1. I like the line snow falling and building snowmen.
    2. Where is the snowmen forming? Who built it?
    3. Why not add where it is forming and How?
    Good job

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