2 Responses to “Seasonal Haiku by Keira”

  1. Hi Keira
    1.I really like the sentence soft lambs Baa cutely
    2.where did you get the idea from?
    3.insred of soft lambs baa cutely write soft lambs bleat cutely
    Keep on with the hard writing

  2. Hi Keira
    1.We really like the line “Daffodils smell beautiful” it tells you it’s spring.
    2. On the line “The crunch of leaves” what colour are they?
    3. “Paddling pools” you could say how big the pools are.
    Preston and Zoe.

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