Snow freezing to ice.
Leaves once fallen now frozen.
Snow crunches under my feet.
The taste of sweets in my mouth.
Bonfires drifting in the sky.
Children collects sweets.
The sun heating the Earth.
People rushes to get ice cream.
Everyone goes into the cold ocean.
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Hi Harrison
1. I really like the line “bonfires drift in the sky”.
2. On the line “children collect sweets” what type of sweets are they?
3.on the line the taste of sweets in my mouth maybe you can put the taste of Cotten candy melting in my mouth
Jax and Zoe
Hi Harrison
I absolutely love the line “snow freezing to ice”
Why have you used the line “ the sun heating the Earth “ ?
You could put the line “ children collect sweets “ before the line “ the taste of sweets in my mouth “
Well done Harrison