3 Responses to “Seasonal Haikus by Natasha”

  1. Hi Natasha
    I really like the line “Pearly snow descends.”
    Where does the smoke roam to?
    Try using the syllable count
    This is a great haiku keep on writing

  2. Hello Natasha,
    This is a really great piece of writing. I especially like the line ‘clouds conceal the tropical sun’ it shows that the clouds are covering the sun up and eating away the sunlight.
    Why is a delicious turkey like a Stafford puppy?
    Maybe you could try to make the lines follow the 5,7,5 syllables for each line?
    This is a really amazing piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading this.
    From Brooke.

  3. Madison and lolan October 21, 2020 at 2:03 pm

    Hi Natasha

    1. I like your line like a Christmas carol . you like Christmas or did someone suggest it to you?

    3. Could you have done more Christmas lines .

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