The Lightning!
Outside, the flashing lightning made the whole town go dark. Inside my home, we had to see by candle light; Henry (my brother) was reading a book and my mum was making us all sandwich because there was no electricity.
Outside, the flashing lightning made the whole town go dark. Inside my home, we had to see by candle light; Henry (my brother) was reading a book and my mum was making us all sandwich because there was no electricity.
Hello!
This is an a amazing piece of work:
1.We like the setting of your story; it really builds a strong picture in our mind
2.Do u like the spooky season?
3. The word sandwich needs a ‘s’ at the end of the word otherwise it doesn’t make sense.
All together a really really good story
Lucy and Samuel
Hi Lucy and Samuel it’s Morgan and Phoebe the creator’s of this piece. Thank you for the lovely feedback we will try and improve the sandwiches and we love the spooky season do you?
Hello,
We really like your poem because of your vacabulary and why did you choose lightning.