2 Responses to “The Winter Tale”

  1. You have used great vocabulary in this piece. This is really, really great. My favourite part is when you said Leaves graciously fall
    Making a blanket keeping the earth warm
    The wet bronze leafs crunch. This is really good.

  2. I like how you rote cold bitter air scrapes against the mossy green house greeting the neighbours in the morning.
    Maybe you could get a little bit more punctuation in it.
    I really like it.

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