2 Responses to “The Accident”

  1. AMAZING BRILLIANT FANTASTIC”!!!!! I love how you did the story. What made you think of this? can you add some adjectives more often please.

  2. AMAZING JOB!! I really like the suspence in these few sentences and I like the simile ‘his heart was beating faster then a drum’ mabe you could use a better word for saw?

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