The Camp Site

John stumbled back to the fire pit followed by Max and Jason. They were all panting and out of breathe but the fire was out.
“Mrs Honey!” gasped Max but there was only silence. Out of the darkness, there was a long, yawning sound.
“What are you doing up?” she asked with half closed eyes, squinting at her watch. John, Max and Jason looked at each other with wide eyes.

One Response to “The Camp Site”

  1. I love where your added speech but i think add more suspense to the piece.

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