2 Responses to “The dragon”

  1. 1.Hello, I like your poem
    2.How did you think about doing it about dragons?
    3.To improve I would describe it a bit more and write a little bit more .

  2. 1. I like you poem.
    2. How did you know about dragons.
    3. Maybe to make it even better you could add another paragraph about something else or another one about dragons. it was very good.

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