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The school by Ollie Sww

One day I ran to school Sam mumbled to him self “I hope I don’t get detention”.
He snuck though the door I sat down Mr doodles boomed good morning. Sam slumped in his seat.

Suddenly there was a click then a bang morning everyone said a loud voice it was Nathan he nudged until he got to his seat. he was acting like a airplane.

Then the head came in Nathan froze he quickly dropped his arms the head glared at him. he said “I’m just streching .” The head shouted “in my room now.”

One Response to “The school by Ollie Sww”

  1. When you said he was acting like airplane You put for the start with no capital letter. :->

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