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🔮The potions room🔮

Harry hurried into the room and slammed the door behind him. BANG! He could feel a shiver slither down his spine like a snake. Infront of him, rusty cauldrons waited to be used, cobwebs hung in the corners of the room and pillars stood with pride before they crumbled.Beams of moonlight shone through the intricate curtains casting strange silhouettes on the pillars.The shadow was a peculiar shape.It had a shape of a ghost in the great hall.At that moment, he heard an ear piercing screech.Whats was it?It was jet black and it seemed like it had bits of elephant skin hanging off it. Could it be? Before he could move a muscle, he realised it was coming closer and closer and closer.Petrified, he realised it wasn’t a friendly house ghost but a…..

 

 

 

4 Responses to “🔮The potions room🔮”

  1. Reply
    Charlie and Sophie November 26, 2020 at 9:32 am

    I liked about it that it was a bit scary but it was interesting

  2. Reply
    Joe November 26, 2020 at 9:32 am

    I really like the suspense in that story. How could a shadow be moving closer to you if it’s on a wall?

  3. Reply
    Anonymous December 3, 2020 at 10:33 am

    i love it, its great nothing needs to change!!

  4. Reply
    Sovrana December 3, 2020 at 10:41 am

    I like how you used a question “What’s was it “
    I liked your suspense in the story.

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