EYES By the Epic SFD Student
Eyes all he could see was eyes in the mirrors so he decided not to as it only occurred yesterday after that incident… Joe didn’t know if he was going insane or if he was alright and it was just a nightmare but.. this didn’t feel like a nightmare it feels real, He has to find help or otherwise he might pass it down or worse but he needed to find solutions, he tried medicine, treatment, but no doctor could help him. Then the menacing Shadow arrived “uh oh” he whispered.
Good use of commas.
Make sure you check your writing to make it ominous.
Good use of ellipse.
What happened yesterday?
Remember to use full stops when needed and comas.