Jonny peered behind every tree in the forest.His red mane of hair was swiftly moving on his head.He could smell moss peeling of the trees.All he could hear was the “sqreeech of crikets.he was thinking about finding big foot. a few minutes later he heard a growl at this moment he sprinted he could hear the foot steps getting louder behind him.

One Response to “Jonny”

  1. HI
    It’s very good but remember to use capital letters after full stops.
    Well done!

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