Opposites
Ollie slowly tiptoed into the lunch hall. “Sorry I’m late,” he mumbled. He went to the line without a murmur. His mind ran through the series of events that happened after spelling lesson.
A second later Brian burst into the lunch hall and shouted “HELLO EVERYONE!!!”. Everyone jumped out of their seats for a nanosecond. Brian whistled as he ate his lunch.
You are a very talented writer,
I love the sentence: His mind ran through the series of events that happened after spelling lesson.
I don’t have anything negative to say
Keep up the good work