I opened the rotten wooden door. Should I go in? Inside the room there where pots and jars filled with cloudy liquid, boxes where strewn across the dusty floor. In front of me, there was a dangling spider, eight eyes all staring at me, it’s legs moving in a hypnotic motion. A beam of light shone over me, in a flash it went, and thunder crackled above me. A figure stepped out of the dark shadows.

One Response to “Shadows”

  1. Isabella and Jack November 26, 2020 at 9:32 am

    1.I like how you described the liquid.
    2.I like how you asked me a question “Should I go in?”
    3.You could improve on next time giving the spider a name or a type of spider like a tarantula?

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