The Horrible Teacher

Jack slowly entered the classroom .Mr Brunch, with an evil voice shouted, ”your late ” yeah but only by 15 minutes . Mr Brunch screwed up his face and glared at Jack. Detention he rowed. Jack turns his heals sighed and bows his head. ”its always me he thought. Shuffling along the condor , he sloped into the dreaded detention room.

4 Responses to “The Horrible Teacher”

  1. maybe check your spelling but the rest was realy good. what made you think of writing about a horrible teacher?

  2. that was amazing . What happens next. You just need to work on your spelling of corridor.

  3. It leaves us in suspense which is really good. Has that ever happened to you before? I really wish you could of wrote a little bit more.

  4. I love how jack walked into the dreaded detention room. Why is the teacher so mean. you might need to work on your spelling but other wise really good.

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