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The lost boy

As a very young boy walks through his house he slipped on something red. He flipped out he thought it was blood but when he looked up he saw a big can of red paint. But as he looked up Evan higher he saw something behind the curtains. He had no clue what it was but then as he walked out of the door his friends were gone. He shouted Charlie jack were are you but all he Hurd was silence and birds being annoying.

One Response to “The lost boy”

  1. Well done! I love this piece of writing! Do you like doing pieces of writing like this? Just look at the part were it says “But as he looked up Evan higher.” There is a spelling mistake! From Ava SWW

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