The space ship

Stealthily, John crept into the electrical room as the vent got gloomier. Suddenly, the lights flickered. The vent opened, John ran. As he sprinted a shadow caught his eye. He ran past the engines and into the cafeteria. He rushed to the dim corner and waited.

Soon his friends arrived. It was only then that they realised that there were two killers among them. Half of them where panicking the others were trying to find  clues as to who they could be.

Later two more people appeared.  “What’s going on here?” they asked.

”Well, where have you been?” replied Jin.  Jin, John and Jack started doing tasks.  In the blink of an eye, Tim and Tom called an emergency meeting.  “What?” they all yelled.

“Jack is suspicious!”shouted Tom. There was silence 

“Tom is suspicious,”whispered John. All of a sudden, the power went out. They ducked back into the corner and tried to calm down.

At that moment, the power turned on. Tim disappeared and Tom was dead. Everyone gasped. They all looked at Jack. The group almost teleported to the escape pods. The group got inside and went to the planet Polus.

One Response to “The space ship”

  1. This was really cool and I really enjoyed it
    Next time try not base it on video games
    And also try mention why there on the ship

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